Nov 17, 2010

The Brutal Loss: Part 2 (Final)

(A/N): Hello, this is the second part of the Brutal Loss. And as mentioned, the title would be: the Great Detective’s Funeral. I may have done mistakes with the previous part…

and Kiel & HalfAngel, two of my faithful friends in DCW, edited the story under my approval. They amazingly corrected all the mistakes, and Kiel added more actions and details to the story, which made me really glad. And to tell you, my dear readers, if you had read the previous part, I suggest you read it again (the edited version), and tell us your opinions through out your review.

PS. Please don’t expect it to be as good. Because if it turned out not as you expect it to turn to be, you’ll be utterly disappointed. Just think that this is just another silly story you are going to read and probably the worst Fan-Fic you’ll ever see!
Thank you, and enjoy~
One shot, Part 2: the Great Detective’s Funeral

Osaka – Police District
Sunday 5th - 09:58 PM
“What did you say!?” Heiji Hattori yelled at Inspector Otaki who had just informed him of the tragic news. It was a joke, wasn’t it?!” Heiji flared at him, “Tell me this is a joke!”
“Hei-chan… he…” Otaki tried his best to be as clear as possible. He had been in  a great shock after hearing the news himself, he didn’t expect telling this to Heiji would be this hard.
“You dare to say it again, and I’ll kill you…!” Heiji snarled, gripping to Otaki’s collar.
“People die…” the inspector told him solemnly, “you have to accept this… this is what we call a reality…”
“Damn it!” Heiji cursed, and then ran off in the opposite direction, “Damn it!”


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